lunes, 13 de mayo de 2013

My greatest ambition


My Greatest Ambition...

Exercise:
You are either Morris's father or mother after his first comic strip got published. Write your thought in three or four paragraphs

Mother:

I'm so proud of my little and lovely chicken! He is so independent and able to do whatever he wants to. Why did I doubt about his excellent capacity? This telegram shows how good and intelligent he is to create such a wonderful comic-strip! His talent gives me goosebumps!!
  But when is he going to that office that is always mentioned between the walls of my sweet and messy house? I hope he could not miss a day of school. But sometimes I think I am too strict with him, I should calm down, sorry, I MUST CALM DOWN. After this great and marvellous triumph, what could I do? He made a brilliant task.
 His achievements surprised me a lot, and I can't ask him to do even more! My last wish for this exciting day is that my ambitious husband can change  his harsh personality, that would complete my day, my week and this total month...
 What am I doing? I have to tell everyone about my son's achievement! Nothing will erase my sweet and big smile from my face...

1 comentario:

  1. Excellent work! Very expressive and sensitive. You have added some deep feelings to this character that wasn´t very developed in the story. Congratulations.
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